I just wanted to add some examples that I thought could have been worded differently. 
“Do not speak foolishness old tree.” - "Do not speak foolishness, old tree." 
“Finish with that nonsense. -"Finish with this nonsense." 
on a second thought - "...on second thought" 
That’s why he had to find out how was it possible - "That's why he had to find out how it was possible..." 
The goddess guided her on her ways - "The goddess guided her along the way/...guided her on her way...etc" 
Her energy swirled around her as she forced her body to make leap into the man’s direction - "Her energy swirled around her as she forced her body to leap toward's the demon..." 
the reptile’s body fell few feet away from the miko - "...the reptile fell a few feet away from the miko..." 
Thanks for your time! 
      
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