| Good one-shot; but there is room for more -- I want to know how Sango fits into this.  You mention her once and Kag recognizing that Sess yells at her, but nothing beyond this.  More info, please!  I would like to see this continue!
       
| Oh wow, this is good. Please continue it?? Maybe Sesshy sends her flowers, lots and lots of flowers after a few days along with a heartfelt letter.
       
| THis is a great start, and I think there is definately room for more. I hope you continue:)
       
| wow...I remember reading this when it was a oneshot..I thought it was starting to end different. it does make a good chapter story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
       
| OOH. Lay it on him Kags, he deserves it.  Hope you continue.
       
joyouki (Chapter 1) -  Thu 28 Aug 2008 
| awh man that was great...oh how i hate cliffies, but I would love a new chapter. OMG Sess submits to her, I love this side of him. I don't think I have read that before.  I love it
       
Noacat (Chapter 1) -  Thu 28 Aug 2008 
| Oh, you so can't leave this as a one-shot! We need at least one more chapter! But I kid, you can leave it here or continue on, it is all up to you. But I'd totally love you forever if you wrote some more. ^_~
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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