What an ass!

..... Wow..... Mind blown :) more please T.T

Keep it coming.

keep up the good work

I sure hope they get there in time!

Keep it coming.

Oh my gosh..... More!!!!! T.T

I got a feeling that Inuyasha has an ass beating coming from Sesshomaru for what he did. But then again Sesshomaru always beats on him.

And the plot thickens..... More!!!

I belive you are doing very well for your first sess/kag fic... this plot has captured my interest...

Update soon!!

Poor Kagome I hope they find her, keep it coming.

Sounds like an interesting start.  A number of grammatical/spelling errors that kind of made it hard to follow.  Other than that, a promising start.  Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Shaking my head... Poor Kagome.... Stupid stupid stupid inuyasha .... More!!!

Inuyasha is such a total ass! I hope Sesshomaru gives him a beating next! And I feel so bad for Kagome. I hope they save her on time!

Keep it coming.

You've got a few spelling errors such as "annouyance" should be annoyance and "grate" should be great, as well as some basic grammatical issues. Also, just as a general story-telling note, whenever a new character speaks, it should be in a new paragraph.
So: "Sesshomaru woke with a start. That damed miko was in his head...AGAIN. Growling in annouyance Lord Sesshomaru got up and walked to his window and looked over the moonlit gardens. "JAKEN" a small toad deamon ran into he room as fast as his little legs could carry him. "y-y-yes m-my l-l-lord?" he stammered, Jaken knew if his Lord bellowed like that he was in a mood that could kill."

Should be:
"Sesshomaru woke with a start. That damed miko was in his head...AGAIN. Growling in annouyance Lord Sesshomaru got up and walked to his window and looked over the moonlit gardens. "JAKEN"
a small toad deamon ran into he room as fast as his little legs could carry him. "y-y-yes m-my l-l-lord?" he stammered, Jaken knew if his Lord bellowed like that he was in a mood that could kill."

Other than that, and a few pacing issues, it seems like an interesting hook. I think, if you fix the style issues and flesh out the story a bit more, so it feels less rushed, this could be quite good!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

This is good now I need a part 2!!!