Leave it to the dumb one of the group to figure out that something is different about the rabbit. I wonder if he'll figure out it's actually Kagome? Hmm...
I'm really enjoying this. I do have a slight correction in case you're interested, withering should be writhing. withering - to dry up or shrivel from or as if from loss of moisture, to lose freshness; droop, to cause to shrivel or fade, to render speechless or incapable of action; stun. writhing - to twist, as in pain, struggle, or embarrassment, to move with a twisting or contorted motion, to suffer acutely.
I'm betting that demon was able to sense that the bunny was really Kagome huh?
All four chapters are great, keep it coming.
So mean Sesshoumaru!
Then again...who knows how much Kagome would get manhandled by little Rin!
lol
Still...poor bunny Kagome!
~Starfyre
Wow! InuYasha actually thought about something! He used his brain and it didn't actually hurt him!
It's amazing!
lol
~Starfyre
Awe! Poor bunny Kagome!
Not even other animals can understand her! :(
At least Ah-Un aren't being mean to her though! :D
What good dragons they are! Bet she brings them lots of treats when she gets back to normal! lol
~Starfyre
Wow, she's not distracted easily.
Let's stop and play with the ears of the male pinning me to the ground!
lol
what a ditz! lol
~Starfyre
Hahaha! Sesshoumaru is being stalked by a rabbit! And it's driving him nuts!
Wonder if he'll get hopping mad! LMFAO!
;D
~Starfyre
I love Shippo's reaction to falling a hole! LOL
so cute!
Poor Shippo is probably all torn up about Kagome being a bunny! :(
It'll work out though, so it'll be alright. :D
~Starfyre
So cute!
Little bunny Kagome hopping along following Sesshoumaru!
so adorable! *Squeals*
great job!
~Starfyre
Oh god I just love this story! It's too cute!
Keep it coming.
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Feb 2013
Love it. So clever. More
All six chapters are great, keep it coming.
Ah! but Kagome!
He can't, they can't!
ARG!
She's just a poor bunny!
Poor bunny Kagome!
Update soon! or the suspence will kill me!!!!
~Starfyre
Bunny Kagome!
hehehe
~Starfyre
All ten chapters are great, keep it coming.
This is such a cute story! I can just imagine the almighty demon lord talking to a little bunny! I wonder how long it will be until he finds out that the rabbit is actually Kagome?
Midian (Chapter 10) - Mon 25 Feb 2013
This is great keep it up
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