This was sweet.
   How God Created Mother
   Good took the fragrance of a flower,  The majesty of a tree,  The gentleness of a morning a dew  The calm of a quiet sea,  The beauty of a twilight hour  The soul of a starry night  The laughter of the rippling brook,  The grace of a bird in flight,  Then God fashioned from these things  A creation like no other,  And when His masterpiece was through,  He called it simply...MOTHER.
   Happy Mother's Day! 
      
This is so simple and sweet :) 
      
Ahhh! 
In a good way! 
      
Loveyaa (Chapter 1) -  Fri 03 May 2013 
I really liked this. It was short and cute (and enjoyable), but compact, dense. Its all the little moments that add up. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :) 
      
Awe! The fluffiness! I want to drag it to bed with me and cuddle it! It's so snuggly. I likes the fluff. C: I likes it a lots. 
Now I needs more fluffy. Must have fluffy! Right up until I have to write the next chapter. You've all had enough fluffy for a while... MwaHahahahahaha! Ahem. I'm better. *returns to cuddling the fluff* 
Great little story, hun! Hope you can get your little one wrangled and into dream land tonight! 
~Starfyre 
      
This was one of the sweetest and loveliest pieces of work I have ever read.  I loved the simple flow of the story and how the time skips seemed normal not too drawn out or out of place!  Keep up the amazing work! 
  
  
      
Beautiful and well-written. Fluff is always welcome when so much angst abounds.  
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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