Omg! Love it already, I hope you make this story suuuuuupppppeeerrrrr loooooonnnnggggg!!! :D 
      
mari (Chapter 6) -  Tue 28 May 2013 
so sad but still liked it thanks. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
I really like it so far. It is a wonder Kagome turned out to be so good-natured, with her crazy family life and all. :) 
Can't wait to read more! 
  
      
Jow (Chapter 1) -  Mon 20 May 2013 
Yikes, I can understand why you had Kagome do that- But I have to admit: I've read this in a Harlequinn Romance Novel. I really like seeing the idea put to use here however, and I cannot wait to read more!  
      
Oops! I meant "seperate." Stupid auto correct... 
      
Wow, this story has a lot of promise! I do hope you continue, but just a tip: you might want to desperate the story's text from any author's notes. It makes it a little cleaner to read. Keep it up! 
      
I read this story on fanfcition, I'm gald you posted it here on dokuga so others can read and enjoyed. Welcome to dokuga Gracie! 
      
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