| Great start. Please continue. Just to say how good it is. I usually only read story that are over 5 chapters long already!! So this really interesting already!!
       
Jaded_butterfly (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Sep 2008 
| Very good beginning. I really liked it.
       
Nobody (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Sep 2008 
| i liked it. The flow was wonderful and very interesting idea. I can't wait for you to update.
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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