Wow, English isn't your first language? I'm surprised cause you're a great writer! I really love this story and the while Kagome/Sesshomaru dynamic! Keep it up :)) 
      
l see the entertaining story please continu'e 
      
thumper (Chapter 6) -  Tue 03 Dec 2013 
honestly, if you had not said english was not your native language i would not have known any better. 
next chapter please! 
      
Hiya I really like ur story nd I don't want to sound like a flamer but your making kagome sound like a conniving bitch, who's conceited....  
      
jodi (Chapter 5) -  Sat 30 Nov 2013 
Great job!!!!!!!!  I am hooked and I look foward to future chapters 
      
hmm, kagome seems ooc in this story. . 
      
Angelbear (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Nov 2013 
I like this story.  It's getting really interesting. 
      
I want more chapter, you got me entralled make me want to read more and more. great story 
      
rose (Chapter 4) -  Tue 26 Nov 2013 
next chapter please 
      
Great chapter, keep it coming.  
      
rose (Chapter 3) -  Mon 11 Nov 2013 
next chapter please 
      
Keep it coming.  
      
Great start on your first Sess/Kagome fanfiction, I love the Harry Potters series, pairings with Hermione and Severus. Please update the next chapters quick, keep it coming. 
      
rose (Chapter 1) -  Wed 06 Nov 2013 
next chapter please 
      
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