I am very interested in seeing where this is going.  I haven't watched the movie Any Given Sunday so I am not sure of your plot.  I also haven't listened to the Kanye West song so I'm unsure of that either.  If I need to I can check out both, but I would like to see from your writing.  Is Sesshoumaru going to be this way the whole story?  I don't think he is acting like himself.  Kagome is kinda crazy too. But this is the first chapter and there are many more posted so I am going to see what happens next. 
      
lol. “Trust me, I didn’t want you here.” LOL 
      
Ooo! Sesshy's catty remarks are hilarious! Lol 
      
Haha this sounfd like my grandparent. I love it.  
      
haha nooooo sir what have you done? one does not simply bear hug sesshoumaru.    SHES PREGNANT. from the first chapter i was like "ooooh she IS pregnant." 
      
Haven (Chapter 3) -  Wed 04 Dec 2013 
omg, Kagome needs to chomp a handful of chill pills and simmer down.  Poor Sess. 
      
Rayne (Chapter 2) -  Tue 03 Dec 2013 
ugh i feel your pain sessh, i FLIPPIN DESPISE!!!!!! christmas decorations 
  
aw this seems like a cute story :) 
      
Midian (Chapter 1) -  Mon 02 Dec 2013 
Don't worry Sesshomaru most women ride the bipolar express this time of year.  :) 
      
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