Great story plot but you have a lot of spelling errors that if proof read would make the the story a lot better than its current form.I would suggest you have somebody to beta for you.The story has potential.

Nice chapter, keep it coming Happy Thanksgiving!

I like a lot can't wait for more.

i really liked the chapter 

AWww Sesshomaru. Loved it

OMG. Loved this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Sesshomaru you better fight for ur woman

Uh oh! Good and bad things happening. I'm thinking that that conversation should happen after she gives birth, just maybe. I can't wait to see what happens next especially with Naraku's still out there and more desperate than ever :)

No! She is Sesshomaru's! Was the male even looking for her? He needs to stay away from Kagome!

What is next? Please i need to know!

I like your story i want to know what happens next

love the update! please update soon as you can

Its good I want to read more. 

awww now that is sweet

Uh oh...well we found out who the spy was pretending to be. Poor Mai, and now poor Kagome. Not always the smoothest, but you're getting better with it all. I can't wait to see what happens next and how freaked Sesshoumaru is gonna be :)

cant wait to see what happens next

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal aired yesterday. Great chapter, keep it coming

UP DATE SOONER I WANT MORE!!!

I love the smut scene, great job! For it being your first lemon, you did good! I like how she came to her senses afterwards. I like that there's attraction between the two. I cant wait to see how this comes together. Sorry for the late review! Keep the good work! :-) 

Wooo, I loved this chapter. Can´t wait to see wre you take the story next.

Wonder whats going on with the other characters

Hope you update soon, i want to know. lol . loved it

That was quick, but I guess when you know you know. I wonder how this mysterious evil will get to Kagome now. Also is the same evil that got wanted the pup (Narku), the same that tried to take Kagome's beast? I can't wait to see what happens next with no rush to get that smoother read :)

Crazy end, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!