loved the update it was adorable.
Maybe it's just me, but i think you went, a bit too fast with this :/  
As romantic as it may be, I would have liked it more, if it has some more subtence... Please, don't take it as a flame (i personally hate flmes)! 
Still, i liked it overall. Nice work ;)  
Thanks for the update <3 
      
Great chapter, I'm glad Rin is ok! Keep it coming. 
      
mari (Chapter 18) -  Mon 07 Apr 2014 
i really love it thanks. 
      
Ana (Chapter 18) -  Mon 07 Apr 2014 
I don't mind if the battle and rescue were short! *-* Sess was a hero! :D 
Thanks for the update! <3  
      
Nicole (Chapter 18) -  Mon 07 Apr 2014 
Battle: not too long + not too short = just right. Especially since this isn't (so far) an ultimate-Naraku-showdown type story :) 
      
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!  Keep up the good work!  
      
rose (Chapter 18) -  Mon 07 Apr 2014 
next chapter please 
      
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