I did not expect such a detailed story in one chapter. I love how you made every word count and painted complete scenes in a few paragraphs. The  story felt complete and polished. I enjoyed it a lot. 
      
My second time reading this and I never tire of it I loved the story  
      
 Loved it !  
      
 This story was amazing and I enjoyed it, Happy Belated Valentine's Day  
      
tonya (Chapter 1) -  Tue 25 Mar 2014 
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