It well written, but other then that it's a dark concept. Sesshomaru taking revenge on Kagome doesn't fit his character. 
      
ouch.  and ouch...  (shweew) 
      
| having read a few of your one shots i'm starting to think your maybe just a little mad at poor Kagome. Other wise it was dark, and well written. sad really. but well writtened and well thought out plot wise.
       
abc (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008 
| lol its a bit of a dark fic... alot of angst and a totally new way of interpreting kag and sess's interaction/relationship. Its different but not bad. its good work =]
       
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008 
| Interesting take from Sesshoumaru's POV.  Well written, good descriptions, even a bit disturbing...LOL, nice job all in all!
       
wawa (Chapter 1) -  Mon 22 Sep 2008 
| This story has alot of shock value. It was good.
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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