LOVE IT! This story seems to be recently new, and I've read a lot of fanfics between thses two. IT's one of the best I've read in a long time! Most others are still good, but really need help or be re-written. But keep up the good work!! This was written wonderfully and I wouldn't change a thing about it. I can't wait for its update, cause I am very excited to read more!  
      
Liking the thi story already, please update the next chapters quick! Keep it coming. 
      
more please 
      
Faux66 (Chapter 1) -  Sun 27 Jul 2014 
This is exciting can't wait to see the rest of it :) keep up the awsm work 
      
This is a great start. Keep it coming. I love the way you switch back and forth between their pov's. I have a hard time on first person pov, let alone trying 2 pov's at once. Good on ya. Can't wait to read more soon...please? 
      
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