awesome updates thank you so much.
Oh how i'm loving the frequent updates. I can see how much fun you're having with this story. It's definitely all yours now :) Great work. As badly timed these updates are since i'm swamped in school work and work work, i still sneak away to read them, lol. Can't help it. It's very realistic, with naraku's struggles with fatherhood here and there. I do look forward to reading more from this story. Keep up the great work 
      
tonya (Chapter 5) -  Sat 01 Nov 2014 
love the updates! 
      
great chapter thank you. 
      
so so cute thank you. 
      
I thought he was having a hard time with kagome picking things out. I wonder how he's going to react to souta wanting a kitty.  
  
  
      
rose (Chapter 4) -  Sat 01 Nov 2014 
next chapter please 
      
Selina (Chapter 4) -  Sat 01 Nov 2014 
Good work! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for updating.  
      
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming. 
      
tonya (Chapter 3) -  Sat 01 Nov 2014 
great story! 
      
that was great thank you. 
      
katie (Chapter 3) -  Fri 31 Oct 2014 
Ahhh that last sentes is funny as hell. Please keep going it is getting good 
      
rose (Chapter 3) -  Fri 31 Oct 2014 
next chapter please 
      
I like it. It's cute and funny. 
      
Marie (Chapter 2) -  Thu 30 Oct 2014 
So far so good. I think I would to follow your story and see how it develops.  So far you have me interested.  Keep up the good work 
      
I read the story that you gained inspiration from about a year ago. I thoroughly enjoyed it and i could see the resemblance after the first paragraph. That story first opened my mind to the idea of Naraku as the protective older brother/father figure instead of the enemy. Anyways, back to your story, i would love to read another story around the same theme and i'm already seeing how you're making it your own. I'll definitely be looking out for future updates ^_^ Keep up the great work.  
      
rose (Chapter 2) -  Thu 30 Oct 2014 
next chapter please 
      
so far really like it thanks. 
      
katie (Chapter 2) -  Wed 29 Oct 2014 
Wow now its getting very good please keep going u got me hooked 
      
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