My breath literally hitched while reading this chapter. I just love how you describe everything. When you mentioned the grown Sesshomaru...I felt my heart beating so quickly. I could just imagine the hotness! I loved the incorporation of the rain. It made the chapter bittersweet. A great flow from chapter 1 to chapter 2. 
This chapter was just so intense as I read the fight scene. So gruesome....yet it tells the reader just how changed Sesshomaru has become. I could see the coldness and lifelessness in his actions. It hurts to see him like this. I can already feel so connected with your portrayal of Sesshomaru. I love it. You did so well. 
Please continue this story and I expect to see many more stories from you in the future. You have great potential. 
      
Hyemi (Chapter 4) -  Thu 04 Dec 2014 
thisss is soooo good!! Please continue this fanfic!!  
      
Caedes (Chapter 1) -  Sat 29 Nov 2014 
Ah! I cannot wait for the next chapter! 
      
Good, keep it coming. Happy Thanksgiving! 
      
rachel (Chapter 4) -  Sat 29 Nov 2014 
I'm in love. C : 
      
Ai (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Nov 2014 
Please update I wsbt to know what happens next. ???? 
      
I've been reading this since the first chapter came out and sorry I haven't reviewed but I love it it's so awsome and the story has so many ways to go from here and I can't wait to see What you will do with this plot and the events that follow it  
      
I love this,:the main villain is naraku. He's so hot. But i prefer Sesshomaru over him. XD 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 25 Nov 2014 
Please update this story it's really interesting and wanna see how kagome helps out sesshomaru  
      
Interesting story so far.  Please update soon. :) 
      
Saeko (Chapter 3) -  Thu 13 Nov 2014 
I like it. You write well, I saw no typos. And the story itself flows well and reads nicely. I'm not skipping words like I do with some other stories. Keep up the good work!! 
      
Guest (Chapter 3) - Thu 13 Nov 2014 
Love at the first sight. . PLEASE MUST BE CONTINUE SOON 
      
Random question as an after thought: any chance this fic might have some smut? (; 
      
I do enjoy where this is going! Keep up the good work! (: 
      
samantha (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 Nov 2014 
This is good . A bit off topic but can you do a Twilight twist Or does anyone know any writer thats done one 
      
what a sweet first meeting! cant wait for more, keep up the wonderful work XLCX 
      
Rhonda (Chapter 1) -  Wed 12 Nov 2014 
Love this spin on Pompei. Enjoying your story very much and looking forward to more. 
      
| Oh my ><, i love it. Please do continue it
       
Marimay (Chapter 2) -  Sat 01 Nov 2014 
I am enjoying this story and I cannot wait for more to come! You are doing a wonderful job and I know you will continue to do so! And Byakuya? If it is who I think it is, then now i am certainly more interested! Lol, I cannot wait for more chapters! 
      
InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 2) - Sat 01 Nov 2014 
I forgot to sign in but OMG I can't wait to see the progression of this story! I love it so far keep it up! 
      
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