| This was funny, I liked it and what a jerk our little Sesshoumaru is...good job very cute
       
| *snickers* just wait til he gets on her bad side when she's having her PMS....that'll be interesting. any chance you'll continue?
       
Hairann (Chapter 1) -  Thu 02 Oct 2008 
| Seemed a bit off to me, but I did like the basic idea behind this one.  Have you tried double spacing new paragraphs to get them to space further apart?  And I would recommend not using blue text, it makes it hard to read.  Non the less it was an interesting read and I think you are the first to have her as a limo driver.
       
| I think this could be expanded with future chapters. I always enjoyed having them banter. I second the spacing suggestion. The blue text doesn't bother me. 
Good job!!!
       
| lol. that's too funny. very cute. good job.
       
sugar0o (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Oct 2008 
| that work under him comment has my gutter brain doing flips. :p this was interesting.
       
Hairann (Chapter 1) -  Thu 02 Oct 2008 
| Looks much better with the fixes Chaos, love him raising the window too, very cute. :)
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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