| this little fic wasn't crappy. there were a few technical errors, but on the whole it was well-written. It was also a little bit short. the only problem with it is the summary. your summary comes across like "Caution: Do Not Read This Story." in the future, look at your work positively. it's a part of you and you should sell it as something great! if you don't believe in yourself, how can anyone else believe in you?
Isis- Fri 02 Feb 2007
| Wow, how could you call your writing crappy? That was actually very good. It flowed well, the characters were on point...I like the blend of humor and sarcasm... I for one would like to see more of your story...
Slm_Candle- Wed 31 Jan 2007
| cool i hope you decide to update
kuma- Wed 31 Jan 2007
| YOWSERS i love it update soon
Crescent Dreams- Wed 31 Jan 2007
It's odd and attacking the nerd-Kagome and God-Sesshoumaru cliches.
Cool.
darkness- Tue 30 Jan 2007
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