| I really REALLY liked this fic. but i do have one suggestion. you might want to change in your summary where it says that this is a pwp. a pwp doesnt have ANY plot, your story has a lot of VERY GOOD plot. the fact that you have it catigorized as a pwp might affect how many readers you get.
| Ah.. so this is where you hide all your naughty fictions >=)
| okay ur very good. Just reading this I was sopping wet...thank you for almost giving me an orgasm!
Kiera- Wed 16 May 2007
| Oh the lemony goodness!!! I love this story so entertaining indeed!! Hahaha mwhahahaha lala. I'm so stupid but very good story besides the sex but the sex was really cool *sniff sniff* I should continue my writing, I learned many things from you my best friend!!! Love ya!!
Kiera- Wed 16 May 2007
| You are such a hentai kodomo! But chikushou! I'm a hentai too, who cares now for part 3!!!
Kiera- Wed 16 May 2007
| You're such a hentai but I'm one too just saying that your story is goooooood cause you know how freaky I can be hehehehe....
| This could actually be made longer, tons of potential here for a full blown..*snicker* story. Think about it please.
| Deeeeeeeeeeeelicious!
| hey, could you write more ff like these? anyway, really good! well, gtg bye.
Elisa- Mon 05 Mar 2007
| Boy this was a VERY interesting way to wake up. I intended on just retruning an IM to a friend this morning but something told me to check this site for any good updates. And what do you know I find that you updated!!! lol boy I seriously do need a nice cold shower now. lol great fic. ^_~
| Hot!!! Nice job!
inugoddesschild- Sun 04 Mar 2007
| I so luv it. Are you going to write more? If so hit me up.
clover_babe- Sun 04 Mar 2007
yay!
thanx for the update!
gawd. t'was very very sexy.
Tamiko- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| omg! the last part's not here! help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| I really enjoy reading this! Cant wait for the next!
Elisa- Sat 03 Mar 2007
That was a pretty intense chapter, especially at the end. Oh the sexual tension, we've all been there. lol
I love the story, update soon!! ^_~
Tana-san- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| oh yeah, I remember this on AFF and thought how incredibly hot it was and quite a shame that it wasn't continued. Glad you found it again and decided to finish it.
Shikyo no Tenshi- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| Awsome, love the plot! PLease continue! P.S. Happy Girl's Day in Japan!!!
hazel- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| DEAR GOD!! WHOA!! nice
clover_babe- Sat 03 Mar 2007
woah.
that was hot.
i like it. update soon please!
Elisa- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| It's nice to read a PWP every now and again, and I think I'm gonna like this one A LOT!!! lol Please update as soon as possible. ^_~
sesshou's gurl- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| YES!!! Update really soon.
Naomi- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| Great start! I love the relationship between Kagome and Miroku. Having a close roommate than you can trust like that is truly an awesome thing. You've captured it well. Good job and I eargerly await more.
vrey- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| NOOOO!! u can't stop there...dam u ... *tears... put me on ur update list please.. extremely entertaining ^_^
vrey- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| NOOOO!! u can't stop there...dam u ... *tears... put me on ur update list please.. extremely entertaining ^_^
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