Very good story the only thing i wish would have happened was that the story was longer other than that a very good moral story. Keep on Keepin on
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black moon inu- Sun 30 Mar 2008
I think you should write another one. Please. write soon.
hugs and puppies
reina- Sun 30 Mar 2008
| lovely. :]
Kohana- Sat 29 Mar 2008
very clever, and nicely written. I love the fact that she used refurse psychology on him.
~Kohana~
| Aww that was so sweet! I loved it!
Gothic Lust- Sat 29 Mar 2008
| aw, that was sad, cute and all over beautiful.
| u should totally do a sequel on this! its was way to short and to good to end so soon!! :]
K,T,M- Sat 29 Mar 2008
| *sniff* dat was so sad*sniff* *sniff* i would love to read a sequal or something to dis story
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