I really love this story. It was a nice pace and didnt rush into the realationship really fast. It really as a good plot and i LOVE the ending!!!!
I don't really know what to say I rarely leave reviews but this story was by far one of the best I've read. And I have been reading on fanfiction.net for twenty years. It was a lighthearted and serious I loved the interactions between all of the characters and their Character development and how much you explored is personality and his interpersonal development. Many people think that a non-adult rating on a story produces childish writings. But this is far from the truth. I wish the story was longer would be my only critique. It was heartwarming well written and I only wish there was a sequel. Thank you for writing this 
      
Jemontgomery (Chapter 59) - Mon 06 Sep 2021 
I don't really know what to say oh, I rarely leave reviews but this story was by far one of the best I've read. And I have been reading on fanfiction.net and do hookah for twenty years. It was a lighthearted and serious I loved the interactions between all of the characters and their Crews development and how much the Explorer his personality and his interpersonal development. Many people think that a non-adult rating on a story produces childish writings. But this is far from the truth. I wish the story washer longer would be my only critique. It was heartwarming well written and I only wish there was a sequel. Thank you for writing this 
      
Shaish (Chapter 60) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
I loved everything. Thank you so much for writing this. It's been such a fun and lovely journey. I could hardly put it down long enough to do IRL things that needed to be done. XD Thank you. <3 
      
Shaish (Chapter 59) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
XDDDDD 
      
Shaish (Chapter 57) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
AHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IIIIT 
      
Shaish (Chapter 56) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
Ooooh that's very clever. 
      
Shaish (Chapter 54) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
;O; Sangooooo. I actually traded up on the Miroku chapter too. ;-; 
      
Shaish (Chapter 51) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-; 
      
Shaish (Chapter 45) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
TAKESHI. YOURE THE REAL MVP 
      
Shaish (Chapter 40) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
Heeeeeee I love 
      
Shaish (Chapter 35) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
;o; ;o; ;o; 
      
Shaish (Chapter 34) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
I am trying so hard to put this down and go to bed 
      
Shaish (Chapter 31) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
XDDD 
      
Shaish (Chapter 25) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
!!!!!!!!!!!! 
      
Shaish (Chapter 23) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
I love this chapter in particular. I love the little details included, like the ways Kagome is changing and has changed, the time bit, her mannerisms like looking at the flower when Inuyasha needed a moment. She's still her but also not. Everyone's lovely too and very in character. It's easy to imagine everything. 
      
Shaish (Chapter 20) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
I love. I also love Yukiko. XD She's delightfully difficult to readhe unpredictable. 
      
Shaish (Chapter 18) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I l o v e. I t 
      
Shaish (Chapter 17) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
Help I l o v e t h e m ;o; 
      
Shaish (Chapter 8) -  Tue 13 Oct 2020 
I love literally everyone in this bar 
      
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