This story of your was an amazing and wonderful ride of adventures and you did a fantastic job at writing the scenes and characters with suiuch depth and clarity. 
  
Thank you so much for both writing and sharing it. 
      
Wispr (Chapter 59) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Damn sweet and romantic chapter and the ending was just priceless! 
      
Wispr (Chapter 58) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Ahh I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru, you did his grief and anguish very well. Love the scene with Kagome at the shrine. 
  
      
Wispr (Chapter 57) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Leave to Kitsune Kagome to find a different route! The teeth scene was "bloody" cool and I like the vision she had of the past. 
      
Wispr (Chapter 56) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Oh what a bloody nasty choice that Kagome has to make, though knowing her, and with her being a Kitsune to boot, she might decide on creating a choice of her own design!  ;) 
      
Wispr (Chapter 55) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Oh Goddess talk about an epic battle ending in a epic cliffhanger. Really enjoying this story and so sad to see getting near the end. 
      
Wispr (Chapter 54) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
You know yours tory got some very nifty plot twist and the real nice about them is they make sense! 
      
Wispr (Chapter 53) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Like how you wrote Shippou's reaction and thoughts to what happen in this chapter and I have a feeling Inari's uncle is in for a very bad ending. 
      
Wispr (Chapter 52) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Oh what a bloody nasty twist your story took. So glad I don't have to wait to find out what happen. Have to say again, you really got a gift for words, you know how to make a scene simply come alive. 
      
Wispr (Chapter 51) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
Seriously this chapter got me a bit choked up... fantastic writting. 
      
Wispr (Chapter 50) -  Fri 12 Sep 2014 
The scene between Yukiko and Sesshoumaru was really cool. I like how you have written his mothers personality. Curious to see what Inari's uncle and grandmother have plan. 
      
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